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I used to be broken.
I used to be wounded.
I used to be hurting.
I used to be crying.

I wanted something,
That would help me heal the wounds.
Make the scars fade,
And teach me to be stronger.

When I discovered the music,
The lyrics changed me.
I've been healed,
Nothing's ever done it so quickly.

I used to be shy.
I used to be desperate.
I used to be hurt.
I used to be vulnerable.

Now I am stronger.
I am ready to fight.
I am stitching these wounds.
I am setting the world on fire.

This is who I used to be,
And this is who I am now.
This is the comparison of who I am now and who I used to be:icongreenlaplz:

Music has made me stronger, particularly the music of Black Veil Brides, my favorite band:iconpinklaplz:

I hope you all enjoy this:iconorangelaplz:

Poem (c) Me-:iconwriterandpoet:
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MidNightIsMe1 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing!!! Love Clap :happybounce: 
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks :D
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011
Awesome I LOVE it!:D
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you :)
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011
Welcome:)
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BVBandTH4evr Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*explodes from epicness*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <- that's all I can say!
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Student Writer
Awesome :)

Awesome that you liked it, not that you exploded.
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BVBandTH4evr Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011
haha
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DeidaraLove13 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is surprisingly true for me! very well written! i love it! ^^
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you very much :D
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:icondeidaralove13:
DeidaraLove13 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're very welcome! :D
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Fluffafly Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
You have a big talent!
So glad I passed by your poetry!
This is really amazing!
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you :)

You just made my day :)
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Fluffafly Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
So glad I did :)
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Paravane Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011
BVB all the way! :O ;D nice poem btw
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you :D
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Paravane Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011
Anytime ^^, hey ur stuff really amaaaazzzing i wish i cud write like that :D
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Student Writer
Aww, you just made my day^^

And thanks for the :+devwatch:
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Paravane Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011
glad i did and anytime ^^
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littletoushiro Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
well written
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks :D
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:iconlittletoushiro:
littletoushiro Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yep
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderfully written <3
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you:heart:
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everdeen13 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You are so good at this <3
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Student Writer
Aww, thanks :)
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NelielChan Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011
AWESOME:D
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you :)
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LonelyRecluse Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Very good contrast between the then and the now, very well linked together as well. Great read.
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you very much^^
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mrlennon Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011
I like this a lot. You sound like you've become a wonderfully awesome person. Kudos to you :)
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Student Writer
Why thank you :D
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AgentBabycakes Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Story of my life.
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Student Writer
:huggle:
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