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It's So Simple

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Love me without restrictions,
Accept me for who I am.
Be the one who loves me,
Make my heart go "bam!".

Simply get along with me,
Try to make conversation.
I'm not that hard to talk to,
Use your imagination.

Treat me like any person,
That you see every day.
It's so simple,
Just make it part of your way.

Take my hand in yours,
We could last forever.
It could be just you and me,
Laying in the grass together.
Sometimes, I get the feeling that the guy I really like treats me differently :iconiluplz:

I get the feeling that sometimes, he really does want to talk to me, but he's too shy to do it
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lovesoranges's avatar
I don't favorite many literature items so I want you to know that I added this poem to my favorites because I found it truly amazing. Many poems I read I can only read once because the poem gives off a one-time-moment emotion but with his poem I think differently.
First off I admire how you were able to put to words what many others (including other poets) can not. I love the line "love me without restrictions". Many times I feel this with my boyfriend and I could never put it into words. For once I want him to just "make conversation" instead of stand there all adorable. Reading this poem inspires me to want to walk up to my boyfriend and just say "be the one who loves me, make my heart go 'bam'!" :D
I think the title for this poem is very appropriate because you made some of the most complicated emotions seem simple. Such as "treat me like any person/just make it part of your way." I would have never thought to say it that way.
This poem has a simple feel for it as well which makes the emotion of this poem all the more stronger because when we like/love someone we feel tongue-tied and don't know how to express what we truly want from the people and you simply say it all in 4 small stanza's.
My boyfriend is really quiet so I feel like I can totally relate to your situation here.

Sorry for the long novel I wrote here I just was glad you asked for my input because it seems most people I comment to don't really care. I hope you keep up the amazing work!! :D I wish you the best of luck with this guy!! As talented as you are, he doesn't know what he's missing out on.