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I have feelings too.

Your words break me,
They cut through my spirit,
Like a hot knife through butter.

They crush my self worth,
And bruise my being,
To a crumpled mess.

This smile you see,
It just to cover up,
The true pain I'm feeling.

You don't live my life,
So you are not aware,
Of the hell that I have to deal with.

I have feelings,
And they can be hurt,
Just as easily as yours.

Let's make you the awkward kid,
Who's constantly being ridiculed,
For everything they are.

Let's see how you like it.
Is it weird if this poem was inspired by Andy Biersack's pants? Well, not technically his pants, but the words "I Am Human" that I saw written on his pants. That doesn't sound too awkward, does it?:iconsparklylaplz:

Anywho, I came up with the first line, and I just continued it from there. This is also one of the reasons that I think people should treat each other better. No one knows what someone else has to deal with, so making fun of them is just mean and stupid. Everyone is fighting a battle:iconcherrylaplz:

I hope you guys like this:iconsunshinelaplz:

Poem (c) Me-:iconwriterandpoet:
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jdoe1902 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012
Talk about the story of my life. AMAZING job!
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks^^
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ojyochan Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011
agreed
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks^^

And thanks for faving it^^
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ojyochan Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
haha yw good job
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Bellesareringing Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011
This is beautiful I have a friend who raves about how good you are at writing I now see why continue to be awsome!
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011  Student Writer
Aww, thanks^^
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Shazaar1983 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Professional General Artist
Nice.
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you :D
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Shazaar1983 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Professional General Artist
No problem. :D
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