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I have feelings too.

Your words break me,
They cut through my spirit,
Like a hot knife through butter.

They crush my self worth,
And bruise my being,
To a crumpled mess.

This smile you see,
It just to cover up,
The true pain I'm feeling.

You don't live my life,
So you are not aware,
Of the hell that I have to deal with.

I have feelings,
And they can be hurt,
Just as easily as yours.

Let's make you the awkward kid,
Who's constantly being ridiculed,
For everything they are.

Let's see how you like it.
Is it weird if this poem was inspired by Andy Biersack's pants? Well, not technically his pants, but the words "I Am Human" that I saw written on his pants. That doesn't sound too awkward, does it?:iconsparklylaplz:

Anywho, I came up with the first line, and I just continued it from there. This is also one of the reasons that I think people should treat each other better. No one knows what someone else has to deal with, so making fun of them is just mean and stupid. Everyone is fighting a battle:iconcherrylaplz:

I hope you guys like this:iconsunshinelaplz:

Poem (c) Me-:iconwriterandpoet:
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jdoe1902 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012
Talk about the story of my life. AMAZING job!
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks^^
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ojyochan Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011
agreed
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks^^

And thanks for faving it^^
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ojyochan Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
haha yw good job
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Bellesareringing Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011
This is beautiful I have a friend who raves about how good you are at writing I now see why continue to be awsome!
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011  Student Writer
Aww, thanks^^
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Shazaar1983 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Professional General Artist
Nice.
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you :D
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Shazaar1983 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Professional General Artist
No problem. :D
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littletoushiro Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I LOVE WERE THE ISPERATION CAME FROM!!!!!!!
and i agree, everyone is fighting a battle
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Student Writer
His pants are just that awesome :)
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011
Amazing!Good Job!^.^
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks^^
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011
Welcome!^^
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks for faving it too^^
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011
Welcome!:D
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DeidaraLove13 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lets see how THEY like it!
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Student Writer
^^
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BVBandTH4evr Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011
:D I have yet to find something you've written that I don't like, and I don't think I ever will! You are an amazing writer! STAY AWESOME MY FRIEND!!!! :D
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you so much :D
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DaiiDachi Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011
I can relate to this a lot. I love this. :)
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks :D
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DaiiDachi Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011
Np. :)
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Melonies Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011
nice work.
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you :D
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Dawnmoon13 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist
I can really relate to this. Its beautiful =)
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks :)
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ShadowMystorm Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011
Hey! :D I really like that, well written! :) Why don't you check out some of my works?
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you very much^^

And I just might do that :)
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AlysonRose Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i like it its really good
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks :)
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BFMVIDRAWWHENASSED Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Brilliant :)
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you very much^^
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marcdelilahcroteau Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
aw...
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks :)
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marcdelilahcroteau Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
NP
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manga-lover1196 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Student General Artist
I love it. I can totaly relate to it.

P.S. I could not stop laughing when you said, "Is it weird if this poem was inspired by Andy Biersack's pants? "
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks you :)

And I'm glad you thought it was funny, cause I thought it was awkward XD
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manga-lover1196 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Student General Artist
You're welcome. And it was very funny, it made my day. Hey, will you chack out my Andy Biersack fanfic. I only have a few chapters :P
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Student Writer
I did :D
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manga-lover1196 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Student General Artist
Yay! :D
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AnimeGirl10129 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
I love this poem to pieces.. Mine reading mine some time? Thanks....
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks :)
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JellybeanGymnast Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You really like la's, don't you?

Anywho, I really like this. I think everyone can relate.
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks :D
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JellybeanGymnast Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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LonelyRecluse Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
The conversational tone of this really works with the subject. It sounds both poetic, yet something that could be said outside poetry. They are words I definitely know, though I don't help people know that I feel. It's far too easy to hide who you are, yet far too dangerous - words picked up from experience. Great poem, can really relate.
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you very much :D
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LonelyRecluse Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It's only the truth
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